When drunk shadows play
in tangled tongues, fervent fingers
Cores collide, tremble-turned
limbs, lips cling, eyes close:
I fall open
Send secrets, soundless promises:
I love you, I love you, I need you
to know that I love you
Until arms reach wrap my body
his hands hold hard,
won’t leave me lost to this storm
where non-being swallows
me in blue-violet-red whirlpools
But sobered selves separate,
he sits on bed-edge
pushes hair away from my face
concern creased forehead asks
if I’m okay.
Are we are okay?
Is this okay?

great lines! the alliteration really works in your favor in this piece.